DRadDaDanDawg's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Prodigiza- 'Dominator']

The intro was iffy, but the part after that was actually really pleasant, but the third part was very simple and just didn't even seem quantized, the transition out of that was really nice, and then the following part was overall pretty nice. I would refrain from using those vocal samples though, they're clearly not yours, they're all different voices, and I expected them to turn into vocals. Lastly, the song ended out of no where, and its was getting more interesting too. I would expand the ending and just run over it again, but it has really nice sections

Prodigiza responds:

Thanks, I made this as a fun pump up song, although I agree if I spent the time to expand it and make it a full electro song it could be very nice. I felt like the drop was too different than the intro, and the vocal samples were kind of a last minute thing for fun. Maybe at the end of this version i'll bring the master cutoff down and bring in a new melody and build back up for something.

[DJ Theof - Mystery]

Fairly simple song, and the use of samples makes it that much less impressive. If this were done in an hour with material you made yourself, such as self crafted synths and loops, I might think this is better, but either way, fairly boring. You have one melody, with a varying amount of background sounds, and then you use the same sound for every transition, Its like a 30 - 1 minute part of a song stretched throughout 3 minutes. And yes I understand you made this in an hour, but that just means you should be working longer before releasing

Overall not bad, but I think lazy and boring

TastyTeo responds:

I agree with you i did not work much on this but hey these days everyone works with samples, and who said everything was ready i am editing all kind of samples i get i don't just add them on patterns if you think this is what i do. If it was so simple as you say people wouldn't like it and wouldn't possibly be in this position. The 1 hour of work shows how experienced someone is because others make projects for days and not that it needs more time before getting released, there are many examples i could give you just now of songs made in 1 or 2 hours that are awesome and way better than this. If it gives you a boring feeling well this is a personal opinion

As for your review i know you are trying to judge fairly but i just checked your music and see you don't have much music production experience, this makes your reviews less strong

Thanks for the review anyway it means a lot to me even that you expressed your opinion.

[Acid Paradox - Creepy Mansion]

Shitty lyircs and really similar overall to the Space one haha

Nice overall though, but the vocals seemed to take away from the horror aspect

[Symphony (GB)]

Been 3 months, something new we can expect? You're stuff is dank and I want to at least make sure you havn't given up music haha

GrantBowtie responds:

no, just having trouble finishing anything lately. Starting new stuff is easy

[Acid Paradox - Galaxy]

I dont know if I got shivers from the song, the story, or both. Maybe if I get good at animating or finish one, I'll make a music video of this haha

[Acid Paradox-The Pirate B]

I'm a fan

[Numi - Midnight]

Ima just list shit while listening that you could work on

1. Too quiet overall
2. Weird resonance on kicks, I would look into that
3. Felt like the song was fading out pretty often and not really fully fading back in
4. Progressed a little slow, I suggest looking into music theory. I'm not going to say Im a pro at this, starting music theory lessons in a few weeks haha
5. 3:35 Ugly bell sound :(

Overall I would suggest mixing and mastering better, and then composing future songs more like "as essay," I was told the same thing. It just feels more like sounds than a song

And this isn't to bash you, I'm just saying things that can be improved if you want to take them into consideration and maybe get better

Numi responds:

Fair enough, dude. Negative criticism is always better than no criticism, at least this way I can build off what I've got and improve.

Thanks for the feedback!

[Gross]

Its ok

but haha I like how you added it as dubstep and "It's like listening to someone touching poop or convulsing or something" haha

TBM responds:

I thought it was funny, only reason I put it up. If you got a laugh out of it, I did my job!